Klai (10 out of 10 ) I disagree, though the cursing isn't completely necessary it gives the Director/reader a vivd idea that during this action sequence it is necessary to make this detail very evident to the audience. Very entertaining movie(though almost has the exact plot as Star Wars a new hope). But if it's not broken don't fix it.
Ed (9 out of 10 ) I agree with Klai-- it's the way Abrams and Lindelof write and it's won both of them awards. It's clearly used to heighten the situation-- and what better way to do it.
Klingon (10 out of 10 ) Very good movie- better than any other star trek movie, although I have to agree with lee about the use of the f word. I don't mind that kind of language and it wouldn't be off-putting if it was dialogue (but not in a star trek movie) but it wasn't. Also, Simon Pegg's portrayal of Scotty was better than the tv show.
Baron (1 out of 10 ) Having seen the finished products from these hacks, I'm not surprised at the way the actual screenplay reads. This script is a mess. Not only do the "writers" defecate on the source material, they also employ an array of amateur-level devices, witless dialogue, and various format errors. Their idea of structure is to think of a place where they want the characters to end up and then make up a bunch of implausible scenes to get them there. Defenders of these hacks like to point out that Trek 2009 was a hit. Really though, anyone could�ve greenlit a $150 million budget space action film with the Star Trek franchise name attached and scored big box office. Roland Emmerich could�ve directed a �Star Trek� with the guys who wrote Click and it would�ve been box office gold. Too bad they didn�t hire talented writers and directors who could�ve done for Star Trek what Nolan and company did for Batman. A well-written, competently directed Trek could�ve made$ 1 billion worldwide (like The Dark Knight) instead of just $400 million with a poor showing internationally.
M.E.S. (4 out of 10 ) I would just like to say, that this script is actually very inaccurate. I was watching the movie, and saw that this whole script was practically made-up, and many lines were left out or completely replaced.
Greener (5 out of 10 ) Jesus Christ, it's like if a lumberjack chopped off his toes and then stumbled into a typewriter factory.